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I am working on a documentary film and have hit upon a conundrum that we hope one of the fabulous Pain in the English grammarians can solve. We are using the full capital case (”all caps”) to identify our experts, in a text box that pops up below them during their appearances on screen; for example: JOHN SMITH, HISTORIAN. One of our experts has a name that includes a superscript letter (e.g.: JANE MCDONALD) and another has the abbreviation Jr. after his name (e.g.: WILLIAM DOE, JR.).
Question: Should those superscripted and abbreviated letters stay in all caps, too? Or should they be treated differently, either lower case or small caps? (e.g.: JANE McDONALD / WILLIAM DOE, Jr.) I’ve searched the Chicago Manual of Style and the Government Printing Office’s online manual, and have found no guidance in either.
Thank you for your help!
Susan
I have an issue with the use of the past perfect tense with “until” (and sometimes “before”). Can you please tell me which of these sentences is correct and why?
She hadn’t realized that she was addicted to nicotine until she smoked ten cigarettes a day. (i.e.: Before she smoked that many cigarettes, she didn’t have that knowledge about herself - not realizing/knowing was earlier.)
or
She didn’t realize that she was addicted to nicotine until she had smoked ten cigarettes a day. (i.e.: First she smoked that many cigarettes, and then she realized.)
I cringe whenever I hear the way Brits say: ‘the company ‘are’ or ‘the school board ‘are’ voted in by the parents. What is really frightening to me is that Americans are starting to use the same construction. My research tells me that Brits treat collective nouns as plural, while in the USA we consider them singular. ‘School Board’ is singular. ‘School Boards’ is plural.
I was taught that one should never use double negatives. But I was also taught that if you do, it can have the opposite meaning.
Example: The box does not contain nothing.
means: The box contains something.
So I heard the President’s speech. Note that he was not the first person to say it because I have also heard several newsmen use a similar expression. When I heard it, it sounded wrong. But I could NOT put my finger on why it sounded wrong. Then suddenly it occurred to me, a double negative!
So here is what I heard...
“Putin badly miscalculated.” or
“He badly miscalculated.”
Since bad is the negative of good and the prefix “mis” makes calculated negative, isn’t this a double negative? I know what they mean. Shouldn’t this sentence be written like so?
“He severely miscalculated.”
Since severe is neither negative nor positive. It just indicates the degree of something.
I wrote, “I have two sons, Bill and Ben.”
An editor said that the comma should be a colon. That opinion is backed up by various style guides which say a list (and presumably “Bill and Ben” is a list) should be preceded by a colon. I still feel that a colon is unnecessary, though I probably would use a colon if I had five sons not two. Would I use a colon with three sons? I’m not sure.
Had I written, “I have two sons, Bill and Ben, both in their twenties” there would surely be no question of a colon being required. It seems odd to me that omitting the final phrase, “both in their twenties” forces the first comma to become a colon.
I would be interested in others’ views.
I was reading an old novel, British English written around 1850. I came across the phrase “I saw signs of elephant in the forest”. This intrigued me as the word "elephant" implies anything from a single to multiple animals. The word "signs" seems to have taken on the role of plurality for the noun. I was asked a similar question by my partner who is editing a book in which the phrase “I saw fairy dancing in the woods,” not meaning a single fairy but many fairies dancing. Can anyone expand my knowledge on the use of a singular noun being used as a non-collective plural noun?
I am a bit confused about whether or not I should use “the” before “most” in the following sentence. I have searched on the internet but I have before more confused about the issue so please help me in this regard. I will add this sentence to my formal writing.
The sentence:
"What fascinates me the most about the textile industry is that it drives the economy of many third world countries”
or
"What fascinates me most about the textile industry is that it drives the economy of many third world countries”
Which one is correct and why?
Hi everybody! Few days ago my mate attended to a job competition for a job in the technical office of Rome. Among the many legal questions there were also some English questions. The one I am asking your help for is:
“Let ……. come in.”
the possible answers proposed are:
- his
- him
- he
I am sure that all of you are thinking that the only right option to chose is “him”, that’s it.
Initially it was confirmed “his” with correct answer and after few days was corrected with “him”.
The english questions/phrases put in these competitions are generally extracted form bigger pieces, books.. and my partner didn’t answer because he says that in a certain contests it can be also right “Let his come in”, for example:
Michele is waiting for the vet to visit his cat. When the vet wants to visit Michele’s cat can say to his secretary:
<< Let his come in >> instead of << Let his cat come in>>.
What do you think? Is it possible consider both the options “his” and “him” correct?
Have you read some examples in books or articles in which you have found the phrase “Let his come in” ?
It can help my partner to obtain the job because he got a score of 20.8 and he had to get 21 to obtain the job! So it is very important the help of all of you.
Thanks !!!!!!!!!
Sells or Sold?
Does ‘sells’ in the sentence,”I find a pet store that sells ferrets.” stay as ‘sells’ or change to ‘sold’ if you are changing the sentence to Simple Past Tense?
Which of the follow is correct?
- CAYA stands for “come as you are.”
- “CAYA” stands for “come as you are.”
I am not referring to the Nirvana song, so I assume that capitalization is not necessary when spelling out what the initialism stands for.
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In the world of RuneScape, few bosses inspire as much awe and challenge as Nex, the Ancient Summoner. Introduced in the God Wars Dungeon, Nex stands as one of the most demanding endgame PvE encounters, requiring skill, preparation, and teamwork. Whether you are an aspiring soloist or a group raider, mastering Nex offers some of the best rewards and one of the most thrilling experiences in RuneScape.
This guide will walk you through everything you need to conquer Nex — from understanding her mechanics and phases to choosing the best gear, tactics, and strategies for success.
Understanding Nex: Lore and Encounter Overview
Nex is a powerful Zarosian general who commands the forces of the Zaros faction in the God Wars Dungeon. Players face Nex in a multi-phase fight inside her chamber, each phase requiring quick reflexes and strategic adaptation.
The fight involves four distinct phases, each with its own abilities and minions. Your ability to recognize and counter her moves will decide your success or failure.
Preparing for the Fight: Gear and Inventory Setup
To stand a chance against Nex’s deadly arsenal, you must enter the fight with optimal gear and supplies.
Recommended Gear
Weapon: A strong melee weapon such as the Abyssal Bludgeon or Noxious Scythe for high damage output.
Armor: High defense sets like Torva (melee) or Seasinger (magic) depending on your combat style.
Cape: Fire cape, Infernal cape, or Max cape with offensive perks.
Amulet: Amulet of Torture (melee) or Amulet of Fury.
Ring: Ring of Vigour or Berserker ring (imbued if possible).
Boots: Dragon boots or Primordial boots.
Inventory
Super combat potions or equivalent stat-boosting flasks.
Prayer renewal potions or Saradomin brews for healing.
Food like Sharks or Rocktails for sustain.
Antifire potions and stamina potions.
Weapon poison or bleed weapons to boost damage over time.
The Four Phases of Nex: Mechanics Breakdown
Phase 1: Smoke Phase
Nex summons smoke clouds that explode if you step inside them, dealing heavy damage.
Use ranged or magic attacks to hit Nex while avoiding the smoke.
She casts Smoke Tendrils — avoid the pools that damage over time.
Strategy: Stay mobile, kite her around the arena, and use abilities that allow safe damage.
Phase 2: Shadow Phase
Nex summons shadow minions that drain your stats.
She uses Shadow Tendrils — they latch onto players, requiring quick removal.
Prioritize killing minions quickly and stay aware of your stat drains.
Use Antipoison and stat-boosting prayers as necessary.
Phase 3: Blood Phase
Nex heals herself by draining blood from the arena.
She attacks with Blood Tendrils, which you must sever quickly or suffer damage.
Avoid pools of blood that can immobilize you.
Team coordination is crucial here to cut tendrils and avoid AoE damage.
Phase 4: Ice Phase
Nex freezes players in place with Ice Tendrils.
Players must quickly destroy tendrils or free frozen teammates.
Nex becomes more aggressive and uses freezing attacks.
Stay alert, use freedom or break free abilities, and focus on tendril destruction.
Combat Tips and Strategy
Prayer and Abilities
Use Protect from Melee during Nex’s melee attacks and switch to Protect from Magic or Protect from Ranged depending on the phase.
Utilize offensive prayers like Piety (melee) or Augury (magic) to increase damage.
Abilities like Debilitate reduce Nex’s damage, improving survivability.
Use Freedom or Anticipation to break free from tendrils.
Positioning
Positioning is vital to avoid smoke, shadow, blood, and ice pools.
Use safe spots to maximize damage while minimizing incoming attacks.
Always be ready to move quickly to sever tendrils or avoid AoEs.
Team Coordination
When fighting in groups, assign roles such as tendril destroyers, crowd control, and DPS.
Communicate about tendril status and health to optimize healing and focus.
Keep track of Nex’s health and prepare for phase transitions.
Rewards and Progression
Defeating Nex yields some of the most coveted loot in RuneScape, including:
Zaryte bow
Nex set pieces
Torva, Pernix, and Virtus armor parts
God Wars Dungeon unique drops
These rewards can significantly boost your combat power and allow you to tackle even tougher content.
Conclusion
Mastering Nex, the Ancient Summoner, is a milestone achievement in RuneScape. By understanding her phases, preparing the right gear, and executing careful strategies, you can overcome this formidable boss and claim its legendary rewards. Whether you choose to fight solo or with a team, Nex offers a challenging and rewarding test of your PvE skills.
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- Lilidala
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Dune: Awakening plunges players into the brutal world of Arrakis, where survival hinges on mastering both environment and combat. Among the many powerful abilities at your disposal, the Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath stands out as a game-changing skill that blends environmental destruction with lethal precision. This guide will dive deep into understanding, mastering, and maximizing the potential of this devastating sandstorm-based attack.
Understanding Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath
The Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath is a high-tier skill that summons a furious sandstorm around your character, dealing continuous area-of-effect (AoE) damage to nearby enemies while applying debuffs that weaken their defenses and reduce their accuracy. Unlike conventional attacks, this skill capitalizes on the volatile nature of the Arrakis environment, turning the harsh desert elements against your foes.
When to Use Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath
Timing and positioning are key when wielding the Reaper’s Wrath. This skill excels in:
Crowd Control: Use it to disperse groups of weaker enemies, quickly softening them up or outright killing clusters before they overwhelm you.
Boss Fights: While its damage-over-time effect is slower than a direct strike, the debuffs it applies make bosses more vulnerable to your team’s focused attacks.
Defensive Maneuvers: If you find yourself surrounded or retreating, activating this skill can create a protective zone that discourages enemies from advancing.
How to Unlock and Upgrade Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath
To access this skill, you’ll need to progress through the Desert Ascendancy skill tree, investing points in environmental manipulation and elemental mastery. Early investment in sandstorm synergy skills will boost the duration and damage of the Reaper’s Wrath.
Upgrades focus on:
Damage Increase: Boosts AoE damage output.
Debuff Strength: Intensifies enemy accuracy and defense reduction.
Duration Extension: Keeps the sandstorm active longer.
Cooldown Reduction: Allows more frequent use in combat.
Key Strategies for Mastery
1. Positioning is Everything
Since Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath affects a radius around you, standing too close to your enemies can sometimes put you at risk, especially if they have strong melee attacks. Position yourself strategically—ideally on the edge of enemy groups—to maximize damage while minimizing incoming harm.
2. Synergize with Team Abilities
Coordinate with your team to stack debuffs. While your sandstorm weakens enemies, allies can follow up with high-damage skills or crowd-control abilities to capitalize on reduced defenses. Communication during raids or PvP scenarios can turn Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath into a pivotal team asset.
3. Combine with Mobility Skills
Sandstorms can restrict your movement slightly. Pair this skill with abilities that enhance mobility or defensive buffs to maintain control over the battlefield without becoming an easy target.
4. Resource Management
Activating Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath consumes significant stamina or energy resources. Manage your resource pool carefully to avoid being caught defenseless once the sandstorm fades. Use potions or skill cooldowns to regenerate quickly.
Optimal Builds Featuring Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath
To get the most from this skill, consider integrating it into builds that focus on:
Elemental Mastery: Boosts all sand and wind-related effects, amplifying damage and debuff potency.
Survivability: Since you’ll be in the thick of combat, invest in defensive talents that increase resistance to physical and elemental damage.
Cooldown Efficiency: Lowering cooldowns allows more frequent use, increasing your presence on the battlefield.
Best Gear to Complement the Skill
Equipment that enhances environmental damage or reduces cooldowns pairs well with Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath. Look for:
Sandstorm Amulets: These increase sandstorm duration and damage.
Desert Raider Armor: Provides bonus resistance while using sand-based abilities.
Windblade Weaponry: Amplifies elemental attacks tied to wind or sand.
Common Mistakes to Avoid
Overusing Without Backup: Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath is powerful but can leave you vulnerable if used without team support or backup.
Ignoring Positioning: Standing in the wrong spot can lead to getting overwhelmed, especially against ranged enemies.
Neglecting Cooldowns: Without proper cooldown management, you might find yourself unable to use this skill when most needed.
PvP Applications
In player-versus-player combat, Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath can disrupt enemy formations and break through defensive lines. Use it to zone opponents, control choke points, and create openings for your team. Remember that skilled players will try to evade or interrupt the skill, so unpredictable timing and mobility are your best friends.
Conclusion
Mastering Sandstorm Reaper’s Wrath transforms you into a formidable force on Arrakis. By understanding its mechanics, optimizing your build, and practicing strategic use, you can dominate both PvE and PvP encounters. The desert’s fury is in your hands—unleash it wisely and watch your enemies fall beneath the wrath of the sandstorm. Fuel your rise on Arrakis—buy Solari from MMOexp.com for fast, safe, and affordable delivery.
Treatment of abbreviations and superscript items in full capital case
- Lilidala
- August 11, 2025, 6:22am
Lineage 2M, NCSoft’s expansive mobile MMORPG, offers players a rich world full of sprawling dungeons, massive PvP conflicts, and terrifying world bosses. One of the most legendary foes in the game is Antharas, the Earth Dragon. In "Shadowstrike of the Antharas Awakening," players must prepare to face this titanic creature while mastering one of the game’s most lethal rogue-style abilities — Shadowstrike. This guide walks you through building for Shadowstrike and defeating Antharas in his awakened form.
Understanding the Shadowstrike Skill
Shadowstrike is a high-damage assassination ability used primarily by dagger-wielding classes such as Treasure Hunter or Abyss Walker. It’s designed for quick burst damage and mobility, ideal for both PvE boss fights and PvP ambushes.
Skill Traits:
Type: Active Melee Skill
Effect: Deals massive critical damage from stealth or behind the target
Bonus: Increased crit rate and chance to ignore defense
Cooldown: Moderate (requires precise timing)
Shadowstrike excels when combined with speed boosts, evasion, and stealth mechanics, allowing you to slip past guards or raid bosses’ AoEs for pinpoint lethal strikes.
Building the Shadowstrike Assassin
To maximize Shadowstrike’s potential, you need to optimize your character for speed, precision, and critical output.
Class Path
Start: Rogue
Advanced: Treasure Hunter / Abyss Walker
Specialization: Choose abilities that boost crit rate, evasion, and stealth duration.
Key Stats to Prioritize:
DEX (Dexterity): Increases accuracy and evasion
STR (Strength): Boosts melee damage and critical power
AGI (Agility): Reduces cooldowns and increases attack speed
Recommended Gear:
Weapon: Dual Daggers or Enhanced Assassin’s Blade
Armor: Light armor sets with evasion, speed, and crit bonuses (e.g., Phantom Set)
Accessories: Crit rings, evasion earrings, and cooldown reduction pendants
Enchantments: Focus on crit rate, movement speed, and backstab damage
Preparing for the Antharas Awakening Raid
Antharas, the Earth Dragon, is one of the mightiest world bosses in Lineage 2M. He awakens periodically and requires a full alliance raid or a highly-coordinated party to bring down. His mechanics challenge even veteran players.
Entry Requirements:
Character level 55+ recommended
Gear enhancement level +6 or higher
Access to the Dragon Valley Cave – Core Chamber
Time-limited event participation (Antharas Awakening events are typically scheduled weekly)
Antharas Awakening Boss Mechanics
Antharas uses a combination of AoE earth magic, tail swipes, summons, and rage phases. Knowing his patterns is critical for survival.
Phase 1: Earth Shockwaves
Antharas uses wide-range ground slams.
Spread out to minimize damage stacking.
Melee DPS should flank the rear and sides.
Phase 2: Stone Summons
He summons golems to protect him.
DPS should quickly clear adds to avoid overwhelming support roles.
Shadowstrike users can burst down casters or healers among the mobs.
Phase 3: Rage Awakening
At 30% HP, Antharas becomes enraged.
Increased damage and faster attack patterns.
He uses Roar of Destruction, which can one-shot undergeared players.
Shadowstrike Strategy vs. Antharas
Using Shadowstrike effectively during the Antharas fight requires both timing and stealth mobility.
Before Combat:
Use stealth abilities to close the gap safely.
Coordinate with your tank to avoid aggroing Antharas prematurely.
Activate buffs and cooldown reduction potions.
During Combat:
Circle around to Antharas’ back and wait for a moment when he’s not performing AoEs.
Use Shadowstrike when your crit chance is boosted (via buffs or class passives).
After attacking, immediately disengage to avoid retaliation — use skills like Evasion Roll or Shadow Retreat.
Mob Control:
During the Stone Summons phase, switch targets and use Shadowstrike to snipe high-priority mobs (casters or healers).
Shadowstrike’s burst makes it ideal for deleting low-HP mobs instantly.
Team Coordination Tips
Assign Shadowstrike users to flank Antharas and handle rear-side DPS responsibilities.
Tanks must maintain threat while leaving the back clear for assassins to operate.
Healers should prioritize movement-based healing to support mobile DPS like Shadowstrikers.
Voice or in-game chat is essential to coordinate AoE avoidance and burst damage phases.
Loot and Rewards
Defeating Antharas offers high-end loot including:
Earth Dragon Jewelry (rare accessories)
Dragon Scale Fragments (used for crafting)
Unique Dagger Blueprints
Antharas Rune Crystals (enhance Earth-elemental resistances and skills)
Shadowstrike assassins especially benefit from the Antharas Cloak, which boosts critical damage from behind and improves stealth duration.
Final Thoughts
In Lineage 2M: Shadowstrike of the Antharas Awakening, mastering both a deadly assassin build and one of the game’s most dangerous bosses offers a uniquely satisfying experience. Shadowstrike brings high-risk, high-reward gameplay, and when paired with strategic movement and precision, it can turn the tide of the battle.
Antharas may be a colossal threat, but with the right build, smart tactics, and a well-prepared team, even the mightiest dragon can fall to the blade of a silent killer.
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