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I wrote, “I have two sons, Bill and Ben.”
An editor said that the comma should be a colon. That opinion is backed up by various style guides which say a list (and presumably “Bill and Ben” is a list) should be preceded by a colon. I still feel that a colon is unnecessary, though I probably would use a colon if I had five sons not two. Would I use a colon with three sons? I’m not sure.
Had I written, “I have two sons, Bill and Ben, both in their twenties” there would surely be no question of a colon being required. It seems odd to me that omitting the final phrase, “both in their twenties” forces the first comma to become a colon.
I would be interested in others’ views.
Which of the follow is correct?
- CAYA stands for “come as you are.”
- “CAYA” stands for “come as you are.”
I am not referring to the Nirvana song, so I assume that capitalization is not necessary when spelling out what the initialism stands for.
If a city and state (and full date) start a sentence in possessive form, would you consider the punctuation correct in the following three examples?
- Frankfort, Kentucky’s crime rate has increased.
- Paris, France’s breathtaking sights left us in a state of raptures.
- September 11, 2001’s tragic events will forever be indelibly etched in the minds of everyone.
Please, no recasts.
When including a complete sentence in parentheses, what are the rules? For example, someone just sent me this in an email:
“I always change some of the readings from semester to semester (for example, I am trying out the book on migration for the first time this semester and am not sure if I will keep it in the Fall).”
But I could just as easily see it written this way:
“I always change some of the readings from semester to semester. (For example, I am trying out the book on migration for the first time this semester and am not sure if I will keep it in the Fall.)”
Are both acceptable? Is one preferred?
When making a list of the very same name of something, is it proper english to use one quotation mark in place of the same name or word after writing it a couple of times down the list? I can’t seem to find anything on it.
Which ending punctuation sequence is correct for a question dialogue sentence containing a quotation within it?
a. ”Does the menu say, ‘no substitutions?’” asked Jo.
or
b. ”Does the menu say, ‘no substitutions’?” asked Jo.
My friend is sending an invitation, and she is using the date of:
January, 16th 2016
Is this technically correct, or at a minimum not considered barbaric? Where should the comma be?
In a sentence, there is the name of a company followed by an abbreviation, the initials of the company, in parentheses. The company name is a possessive in this sentence. Where does the apostrophe go? I want to know how this would work, as I am having trouble finding anything but advice to restructure the sentence, and I would like an answer that gives me what to do with the sentence as it stands.
Example: This policy sets a standard for determining access to Introspective Illusions (II) resources.
Would it be Introspective Illusions’ (II’s) or Introspective Illusions’ (II) or some other construction?
Should a rhetorical question end with a question mark?
I have a question about “;” and “—” as used in sentence structure. I prefer using — i.e. “He did not expect to meet anyone—the house had been empty for years—and was surprised to hear whistling from the upper floor.”
Now, as I wrote a line in my story, as sentence ran away from me and I ended up using a ; at the end, as well as the — and I got the feeling that maybe it had to be one or the other all the way through and not a mix. Anyway, the sentence (racial slur warning)
Rod had not let her buy the beer herself at first—not until father had gone down there and cleared up some misconceptions from that sneaky pool-digger—and hadn’t that been a fun day to be alive; now he just gave her sympathetic looks whenever she came to get beer for her father.
So, in such a sentence, is it right to use both the “—” and the “;”? I can always rebuild it, but it felt right to me somehow, even though I got uncertain about if it would sting in the eyes of others.
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as best he can
- nuvolari344
- May 17, 2025, 4:48pm
It seems the phrase "as well as he could" gives a more adequate description though these words appear clunky and superfluous and do not give an accurate description of what is meant. It is hard to find words or a phrase that convey that degree of meaning or uncertainty.
Treatment of abbreviations and superscript items in full capital case
- Mwaldo
- May 16, 2025, 2:22am
X as in to exchange. Xchange, right? So it becomes Video Transmission Exchange. "Exchange" is a place where things are being passing back and forth or helped to pass back and forth. Take for example a telephone exchange. "A telephone exchange is called an "exchange" because it acts as a central point where different telephone lines are switched or interconnected, allowing calls to be routed between them. It's analogous to an intersection on a road network where vehicles switch from one road to another to reach their destination. " Google AI]. "Currency Exchanges" leverage the same meaning.
Past perfect with until
- Dagmar19
- May 15, 2025, 1:06pm
Would removing the negation help with clarity? As in:
"She (only) realized she was addicted to nicotine after/when she started smoking 10 cigarettes a day."
One could add 'only' to emphasize the sequence of events.
Pronouncing “str” like “shtr” as in “shtrong” “shtrange”
- dl626
- May 9, 2025, 11:07pm
It so irritating!! The adminsrashion wants conshrushion on schreiber shreet? What?? it is almost at the point of being non-understandable. The ashoshiation is indeshructable, the shtage is set. These are comments I heard on the news tonight. When will this shtop?
“my” vs. “mine” in multiple owner possessive
- Fullstackdevelopercampus
- May 9, 2025, 5:32am
Really appreciate how you broke this down. As someone who's just getting into this topic, this post helped clarify a lot of confusion.
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“my” vs. “mine” in multiple owner possessive
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- May 6, 2025, 1:23pm
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“my” vs. “mine” in multiple owner possessive
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Sells or sold?
- ashrithabrollylabs
- May 4, 2025, 3:26pm
I agree—“sells” should change to “sold” if you’re shifting to the simple past tense. It keeps the tense consistent, making the sentence clearer. Great question!
“my” vs. “mine” in multiple owner possessive
- devi.brollylabs
- May 2, 2025, 7:17pm
Interesting discussion! I’ve heard both “I hope you and your family are well” and “I hope you and your family is well,” and always wondered which was correct. Thanks to this post, it’s much clearer now. It’s great to see grammar being discussed with such attention to detail — really helpful!
Treatment of abbreviations and superscript items in full capital case
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