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trivates

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What about expletives?

"Hey, watch where you're going, Asshole!"

vs.

"Hey, watch where you're going, you asshole!"

There's a doozie.

trivates2 August 15, 2012, 12:11pm

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She kicked off her shoes. “I’m pretty spent. That was an incredible weekend, but I really must get ready for work. Will you come see me tonight, Precious?”

vs.

She kicked off her shoes. “I’m pretty spent. That was an incredible weekend, but I really must get ready for work. Will you come see me tonight, my precious?”

trivates August 14, 2012, 8:47pm

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