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jack

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I wrote the following text for my website then became concerned I was making a hash of it. The comments on here make me feel it may be ok. Basically I need to put in the pertinent key words without the bumph, but also without making it too staccato or formal.

Wedding, partnership and friendship rings...
modern design diamond rings...certified diamonds...
blue, red, yellow and black diamonds...
platinum, rose gold, white gold, 18ct & 9ct gold...
frosted, hammered and satin finishes…

Jack November 23, 2006, 9:38am

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