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Joined: June 11, 2008
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I taught English for 32 years. You have the correct punctuation throughout. Add the word 'two' before 'cousins'.Also, words of address always have a comma after them, as you have done.my first teacher,my second teacher
June 11, 2008, 8:48am
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