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Joined: December 12, 2006
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Now you're goofing with the intent of the message, which is to reassure the customer that they will soon be helped. It's now become - for the sake of grammar - a cold declaration. I can almost picture a man in a black suit with a gun saying it, and maybe tacking on the phrase "so you're just gonna hafta wait like everybody else." I like "...in the order in which it was received". Wordy suits me just fine.
December 12, 2006, 11:13am
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