David Heise

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Re: Past Perfect vs. Past Tense  •  March 13, 2011, 8:28pm  •  2 votes

I agree. The former, while slightly more "wordy," (to coin an AmE term) is indicative of good story telling and thus good writing. If we were writing this in an incident report for a security company,