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Present adverbs in past narrative

Hi

Would it make a major difference to the meaning of the sentence below if “now” were omitted?

“Three months after his father’s death, Dave was now running the shop.”

  • July 14, 2005
  • Posted by m56
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I would agree with Matt. The "now", resolves a potential ambiguity. Compare it to "Three months after his father’s death, Dave was still running the shop."

porsche October 27, 2005, 6:14pm

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Rather than just make it more explicit, I think that the "now" gives the importance of the second part of the sentence a sort of implied emphasis. To elaborate, it's as though it's saying "at last," or it's remarking that it's a sad chain of events.

Even more emphasis could be lent by saying "only now" (as though he'd be waiting to run the shop for some time). Unless there is supposed to be an evoked sympathy for the brief time period, in which case place "Only" before "three months." The possibilities are abundant, sorry I'm getting carried away. :)

sarah July 15, 2005, 12:38pm

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Hi, Gary

I agree with all you say here:

I'd say it works either way, but the now makes it more explicit.

m56 July 14, 2005, 5:55pm

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It seems to me that the addition of "now" indicates that he wasn't running the shop before his father's death.

I'd say it works either way, but the now makes it more explicit.

Matt July 14, 2005, 11:58am

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Gary

Couldn't the following sentence be the same with or without the added "now"?

Janet

<"Three months after his father’s death, Dave was now running the shop.">

Do you see the point-of-view being the reader's present there? Or, does the inclusion of "now" clearly mark the sentence as set in the present of the story. I mean, by using "now", isn't the writer attempting to shift the reader into the character/s present?

Instead of looking at the action as "then" (i.e. from the reader's present), we look at it from within (i.e. from the Now of the story).

What do you think?

Anonymous July 14, 2005, 11:21am

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The difference is going to be found in the next sentence.

"Three months after his father’s death, Dave was now running the shop." The next sentence will be in the present tense, because "now" tells you that "3 months after" is the current time for this topic.

"Three months after his father’s death, Dave was running the shop." The next sentence will continue a narrative of past events.

Gary

Gary July 14, 2005, 9:35am

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Nope, no difference at al... in this particular case.

Janet July 14, 2005, 9:24am

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