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Questions in Bulleted Lists

May 27th, 2008 by Kaitlin

Is it appropriate to use a bulleted list in a question? Example:

Which type of flour would you use for the following items:
– bread
– cake
– cookies

Would you put a question mark at the end of each bullet? Would you only use a question mark at the end of the last bullet? Does the sentence need to be re-worded?

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8 Responses to “Questions in Bulleted Lists”

  1. Natalie Jost says:

    That's a good question. If it were me, I'd replace the colon with a question mark and leave the list as is.

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  2. Rob says:

    There are many occasions in the English language where something that is not technically incorrect is still bad from a stylistic perspective. That's what I think you're dealing with here.

    I suggest ending the initial part of the question with a colon, then following with the three items separated by commas or–if they're longer options–by semicolons. Bullet points are certainly an option, but I don't know the rules on how those are handled.

    Best of luck.

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  3. Tolken says:

    Punctuation of bulleted lists is always a nasty. My advice is always that if you can't express exacty what you want to express WITHOUT PUNCTUATION then don't use a bulleted list at all.

    Don't put ", or" or ", and" at the end of bullet items, either.

    The trick: finish a sentence before beginning the bulleted list. NJ's suggestion is very sensible. If you want to be scrupulous, rewrite the sentence:

    "For each item in the following list, which type of flour would you use?"

    or even replace it with an imperative:

    "For each item in the following list, state the type of flour you would use."

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  4. vera says:

    I was going to suggest to just say "Name the type of flower…" but Tolken beat me to it. :)

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  5. Tom says:

    I would likely format it like so

    Which type of flour would you use for the following items?

    a) bread

    b) cake

    c) cookies

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  6. Mike says:

    "Which type of flour would you use for bread? Which type of flour would you use for cake? Which type of flour would you use for cookies?"

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  7. Smart Hick says:

    When I first read this, I thought, "why even have bullets?" Then I saw that the three items did, in fact, require different types of flour. The way I would do it is as follows:

    Which type of flour would you use for the following items:
    1. bread

    2. cake

    3. cookies

    But if you wanted them to end in question marks you would want it to look like this:

    Which type of flour would you use to make…

    1. bread?

    2. cake?

    3. cookies?

    That is my opinion.

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  8. Pamela says:

    Does it have to be a question?

    I'd change the stem to:

    Identify the type of flour you would use for:

    - bread.

    - cake.

    - cookies.

    (Each item in the list can be placed at the end of the stem to make it a complete sentence, which is why I added punctuation.)

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